Once again, it’s time for Friday Fictioneers, which provides a weekly photograph to serve as a writing prompt to create a 100 word flash fiction story. Once again, my daughter (Johanna, 16 years old) has crafted a story.
Marvellous Mary
by Johanna McClure
“Ladies and gentlemen, I give you, the Marvellous Mary, on her genuine spider-silk tightrope! Without a net!”
The ringleader dragged out every word, and the audience cheered and the lights shone, the same way they had on my first day. The way still I love.
I’m more confident up here than on the ground. I always throw in a wobble, like I’m about to fall, just to give the audience a thrill. The thrill that the tightrope gives me.
“Whoa! I really thought she was a goner folks, but she’s done it again! Give a Mary a hand!”
Tension and excitement, I love the glimpse into the artist’s view
The pov of an experienced tightrope artist, such a unique take. Fun story.
She knows the entertainment world well. Very good story.
A fun story. I feel like I’m there.
I saw a flea circus,
Elmowrites, thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it! -Johanna
GHLearner, I’m glad you liked it. -Johanna
Msjadeli, I’m glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write -Johanna
Ahtdoucette, thanks, that means a lot to me – Johanna
Michael1148humpris, that’s cool, It’s interesting how different people see things in different ways. -Johanna
Dear Joanna,
I like where the prompt took you. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Rochellewisoff, thanks, I’m glad you liked it-Johanna
Very nice blog.💥 🤗 2021-06-21 02h 04min